Difference between revisions of "Talk:Wolf O'Donnell"

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:::::The only things I'd suggest are to remove both the mention of Leon as it's not that important and the idea that Wolf's design underwent a revision in ''Assault''. We never saw his body so mention something closer to Wolf's full body was seen for the first time in ''Assault''. I'd also suggest you throw in the comparison of Wario and Wolf I added. Mainly because Wario is a well known character, so comparing the two gives someone the idea of how Wolf acted in ''Command''.--[[User:TW|TW]] 12:49, 15 March 2011 (PDT)
:::::The only things I'd suggest are to remove both the mention of Leon as it's not that important and the idea that Wolf's design underwent a revision in ''Assault''. We never saw his body so mention something closer to Wolf's full body was seen for the first time in ''Assault''. I'd also suggest you throw in the comparison of Wario and Wolf I added. Mainly because Wario is a well known character, so comparing the two gives someone the idea of how Wolf acted in ''Command''.--[[User:TW|TW]] 12:49, 15 March 2011 (PDT)
== Where should I put... ==
...his "biography" text from the official ''Assault'' Website? ([[User:Wolf O'Donnell|Wolf O'Donnell]] 21:10, 27 May 2011 (PDT))